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I've read so many stories,
yet none appeal to me
I want the weak minded thought's,
I want to know their dreams

I'm sick of strong  male characters,
and feisty female minds
I want someone who can't take it,
someone who's lost the fight

I want the truth behind the lies
Not the mask that hides the shy

I want their inner feelings,their core
I want to know their hearts, do they feel remorse?

I want to know their fears, their worries
I need to know who they are, their stories
This one......well......figure the meaning out for yourself.

A poem by me, ObsessedNerdGirl (Sophia)
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schmennyjenny Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
great stuff
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ObsessedNerdGirl Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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schmennyjenny Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
:-)
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PhoenixOfWinterfell Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
... I suppose you're talking about the kind of books we find these days? If yes, I totally agree with you. Sometimes we want to read about a character we can relate to (well, me at least), and not one who's almost "perfect".

If no... Well, I tried ^^"
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ObsessedNerdGirl Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's exactly what I was going for, you got it perfectly.
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PhoenixOfWinterfell Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes! ^^ I find the poem extremely well-done! You really know how to write.
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ObsessedNerdGirl Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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Phenomenonn4o Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awsome ^^
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ObsessedNerdGirl Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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Phenomenonn4o Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome ^^
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kaboomduck Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice, compact and effective piece :)

Broken characters are sometimes the most interesting, especially one with heavy flaws :nod: If I got this right, are you talking about books nowadays? Cause I feel just the same with most stories out there now. It's either action, loud stuff, or too dramatical and...well, you know, the usual kind. ^^;

Anyways, great poem!
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ObsessedNerdGirl Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's exactly what I'm talking about and thanks!!
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Agree.
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ObsessedNerdGirl Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good
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Jujutsu Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes. Absolutely, yes.
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ObsessedNerdGirl Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you agree
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Ringtail101 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Student Writer
very well written. nice work! and its very true as well.
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ObsessedNerdGirl Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
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Ringtail101 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Writer
your welcome lol
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aillin1 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012   Writer
Entertaining. Thank you very much for writing this.
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ObsessedNerdGirl Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem.
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ilove-sky Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Breath-taking! Wow, really, its magnificence has left me with no other words.
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ObsessedNerdGirl Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, thanks so much!
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ilove-sky Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
'Twas my pleasure :)
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Soul-singing Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Writer
That is so true. I like your turns of phrase!
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ObsessedNerdGirl Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you, thank you!
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